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Zac your Hawaiki looks beautiful! I like how your writing is very poetic and it takes me straight to the beach. I wonder if you could use adjectives to add more description into your writing. I hear loud waves crashing onto the peaceful shore...
Zac your Hawaiki looks beautiful! I like how your writing is very poetic and it takes me straight to the beach. I wonder if you could use adjectives to add more description into your writing.
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What a delightful place your Hawaiki is Zac! You have used lots of beachy words. Well done!
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